Offensive.
While I'm not normaly the kind of guy to get up tight about sick and disturbing humor, or almost anything for that matter. This really offended me. I'm not exactly sure of what you were even trying to do here. Aside from my problems with your so called "plot" about brian's problem (which is increadibly disquisting). I felt as if you guys had put almost no effort into at all. I mean anyone, even a newb can lip sync like that. And, besides the talking, there was almost no animation at all. Come on.
But. I will admit to finding myself loving the artwork. As gross as it may be.
And, at first u had me going. With the whole akwardness between the kid and his coch. You had a real set up to make it increadibly hilarious. I am sorry if I am being a little up tight. Just these kinds of things make me feel wrong. Just gross dude, gross. Sorry for being uptight once again.
On another note. I found that the audio quality itself was increadible. The volume was proportioned just right to the loud background sounds. But it made it feel as if you were actually in a park of some sort.
You guys have great potential, and I look foward to what you have in store for us in the future.